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Originally Posted by KennyCerealBowl

Wtf are u saying?

lol.

its a mirror edge. the connection between what is and how you see it, the different perspectives that surround you, but I wanted it to be more than that. like a working case of that. Because just describing what you see or just describing what it means is so thin, especially when you begin with one and construct the other around it

If you don't understand, might be partly because I wrote it too abstractly, it might be because you don't have adderall tier concentration, it might be because you've never actually compared methods of writing

but its also because what I am saying isn't important its what it loosely ties together to all mean, and that's why Bukowksi is a great writer

good luck with your rhyming goals of 2013