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Mr. J · 05-22-2013, 12:10 AM

Dry docks finding hiding spots to push downstream
Or to populated lots where these ears don't hear loud screams
Now I redeem at the ATM what bloody hands fiend
And warm water provides washing away convicting scene

^^^^^^^
thought that little section was fire
actually I enjoyed the whole thing
the flow was on point and the vibe matched your style
nice work all around I think, I haven't read much from you
but you have garnered my interest...keep up the pennage

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05-22-2013, 12:10 AM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Dry docks finding hiding spots to push downstream Or to populated lots where these ears don't hear loud screams Now I redeem at the ATM what bloody hands fiend And warm water provides washing away convicting scene ^^^^^^^ thought that little section was fire actually I enjoyed the whole thing the flow was on point and the vibe matched your style nice work all around I think, I haven't read much from you but you have garnered my interest...keep up the pennage