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Tha Pastor Reach Yeah · 07-01-2017, 08:50 AM

I kinda feel that your opening bar was like a challenge that you threw down to whoever reads this. Like, "Are you smart enough to understand this verse? I don't think so!" which is a pretty bold move really to make at the beginning of your verse. The whole verse really was a lifting up of yourself while putting others down quite condescendingly, which fits in with your on-line persona at the moment.

Most of the verse was a fairly standard flex, but I thought your opening was very provocative so I think you pulled that off well.

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07-01-2017, 08:50 AM	#1
Tha Pastor Reach Yeah Allan o dywyllwch Join Date: Jul 2016 Posts: 163 Battle Record: 10-0 Champed - AOWL Season 7 - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 514460	I kinda feel that your opening bar was like a challenge that you threw down to whoever reads this. Like, "Are you smart enough to understand this verse? I don't think so!" which is a pretty bold move really to make at the beginning of your verse. The whole verse really was a lifting up of yourself while putting others down quite condescendingly, which fits in with your on-line persona at the moment. Most of the verse was a fairly standard flex, but I thought your opening was very provocative so I think you pulled that off well.