Week 3: Maximus vs. Sammy [Sammy 5-3]

Razah · 01-08-2017, 08:23 PM

Cool battle. I enjoyed Maximus verse more than Sammy's.

The second segment was my favorite, and I liked the 4 roads idea you went with. I feel like it was just a better verse over all, including how much I personally enjoyed it, mechanics, flow, etc..

Reading Sammy's opening lines, I thought it would be followed by a very solid verse with a fresh spin on the topic but I was kind of let down. The verse was decent, but I feel like you could brush up on your mechanics a bit. I look forward to reading more of your stuff

vMaximus

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01-08-2017, 08:23 PM	#13
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	Cool battle. I enjoyed Maximus verse more than Sammy's. The second segment was my favorite, and I liked the 4 roads idea you went with. I feel like it was just a better verse over all, including how much I personally enjoyed it, mechanics, flow, etc.. Reading Sammy's opening lines, I thought it would be followed by a very solid verse with a fresh spin on the topic but I was kind of let down. The verse was decent, but I feel like you could brush up on your mechanics a bit. I look forward to reading more of your stuff vMaximus