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Old 01-07-2017, 11:23 PM   #7
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first dude (insanevillianpad)

I liked
Fill those crack pipes fatter… cops wont take you out in handcuffs
They killin niggas daily, shootin’ us with our hands up


And people are too blinded by the media, to spark a revolution

^True in every sense of the word. The entire system, root and all needs to be cut down.

Very solid handle on topic, never once for a single moment flirting to divert readers attention from the message. thinking on it, you have verse discipline. political content is palatable for a mass audience, that is to say it strikes center left on the paradigm...even though you take shots at the whole system.

since you engaged my political sensibilities i am urged to comment personally:

BLM is reactionary and serves the oppressor in the end. BLM is also organized and founded by the rich bourgeoisie (as far as I understand). It fosters division among the races, their unity. Unity among blacks and whites is extremely terrifying to the oppressing class...so much so.

overall this was a good piece to strike mad conversion.




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second dude (2trippad)

this story began like any other
im like the godfather you wont refuse my offer


monster opening, godlike potential...

only to follow up with:

you aint creative even tho
everybody in the leagues defeated you
your on your last legs


oh really. we going straight back to diss verse. what a buzz kill

I think you are hiding your ability from everyone. This is laden with talent, but its all mixed up and does not know a proper exit or entrance.


vote: first dude (insanevillianpad)
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