Week 3: Maximus vs. Sammy [Sammy 5-3]

[2tripple0]

im gonig with the first verse i enjoyed the effort from the second verse but i liked how the first guy stuck to the topic i also didnt like a bit of the flow in the second verse it felt like delivery maybe dont know but hte flow was a bit allover the place.... i liked the idea of the verse but it just was too hard to understand i was confused was life getting shorter or longer and i was confused with the ending as well the flow again was off i didnt see the rhyme dont know i struggled with this verse it was alright im not going to completely throw it like out or anything but it was like is the road getting longer or shorter you get me one a those thinner/larger kinda shit....... i admit it was a solid effort but the first verse really shone for me i liked it was much more impactful then this idea of a road dont know they were both nice actually i dont want to pull too much from either but now i know why i like the first verse more because of the use of repitition and structure..... i liked how four lines were dedication to each section and the first line always started the same...... that was cool......the second verse lacked this there was barely any creativity to it if you get me..... obviously the first dude thought about the verse and how to use repitition to his advantage..... yeah anyways so yeah.......



vote: first dude (Maxipad)