Week 1: Adonis (0-0) vs. Mr. J (0-0) - MR. J WINS 3-2

Sammy · 12-21-2016, 08:54 PM

Adonis really digging the poetry of your language. Cool how u went all meta and stuff like that. Flow is butter. The alliteration was dope them it kind of surfaced to often which takes away from the effective. But word all in all dope verse. One of my favorite verse of the week.

Joker cool character study. You gave Lotz of shades and dimensions to the character. The scheme worked well to paint the picture of the spoiled kid. I suppose my only issue is that it was I wish u carried the theme all the way, at least for the ending. You had th is cool art thing going on but it kind of went nowhere

Adonis had one of ,your favorite dropsocial of the week unfortunately, just had my favorite drop of the week. Slick rhyme and interesting character sketch wins it for me.

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12-21-2016, 08:54 PM	#1
Sammy Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2015 Posts: 103 Champed - Write Week 7 Rep Power: 3415776	Adonis really digging the poetry of your language. Cool how u went all meta and stuff like that. Flow is butter. The alliteration was dope them it kind of surfaced to often which takes away from the effective. But word all in all dope verse. One of my favorite verse of the week. Joker cool character study. You gave Lotz of shades and dimensions to the character. The scheme worked well to paint the picture of the spoiled kid. I suppose my only issue is that it was I wish u carried the theme all the way, at least for the ending. You had th is cool art thing going on but it kind of went nowhere Adonis had one of ,your favorite dropsocial of the week unfortunately, just had my favorite drop of the week. Slick rhyme and interesting character sketch wins it for me.