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05-20-2013, 12:16 PM
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Arm the Homeless
Join Date: Jan 2013
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So I'm feeding this after I liked your last piece and if this was a key then nice. The flow in this is what really held this together nicely. Virtually no hiccups in the first section but as End said it did sorta fall off toward the middle to me but no biggie man. You got skills.
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