King Karaoke vs Schadenfruede - Karaoke wins.

[Pinot Grij]

Kar

Opener is a little light and the rhyming on "hell prick" "rellik" is clearly off.
Someone else had a STI line in the 1-2 that overshadowed this one.
Purse bags are a hard sell.
Cam bar is CRAZY - nice execution.. timely af too. Nice shit.
Kanye bar is fuckin insane too. Nice simple angle with solid execution.
Off rhyming again in the food bar.
Looks like you're scraping from Discussion for concepts.
Grandmother bar was crazy.

Kar - 3 lines here were fucking flames, the other parts were pretty light.


Schad.

Opener feels overworked.
Not feelin the high and bi concept. Feels stretched.
Clash line is ok. but still feels like a miss.
Karpet is a stretch.
Mysterio line, set up and rhyming is crazy, but not feeling the end result.
I'm not getting the T-Mobile.
caterpillar/butterfly is ehh.
Closer is nice.

Schad, I think you overthought yourself on this one. I've seen you execute great concepts time after time - but this felt like every line was reaching for the stars and never quite landing. I kept wishing you could bring it back down to earth, but most of the concepts were too overcooked to land hard in my mind.

Vote -- Karaoke for two exceptional bars and one really good one.