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09-09-2016, 11:10 PM
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Witty's is well concocted and the writing is top notch, but the punch is a little played and predictable.
Des put more effort into this than anyone this week, I believe. An interesting punch that hits well and works both ways. Feels a little over-cooked if I need to offer criticism. Vote -- Des
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