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The Clown Prince
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figured Id humor myself and listen....
the hook was kind of goofy for me, the mic work sounds real computer spit verses. the hats throughout the song feel very soulless & so does the belief in your voice. then that random mumble of more money made me laugh because...what?!?! it reminds me of the locals around here that make these real hype tracks to a bass that should smoothed over. maybe if you didnt spit your verses so fast I could see the appeal in what you created. crafted a different intro do something different in acapella and let the beat ride in. not sure how long you been doing this but its much better than what Ive had the opportunity of listening to with such...Im not sure what word Id use here...Im thinking amateurish but above that a few notches. anyway you should change your name to Oscar, Isaac... you got the drive bwoi even if it is standard...ba dum tss
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