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Old 07-25-2016, 06:36 PM   #1
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mom said it said lesbian... & thats still being debated.
cuz i c dick goes in pussy but got inclinations.

(what inclinations? why is this important?)

yet and still that wasnt the reason i got my hair faded.
it was symbolic. freed myself from bondage.

(ok.)

bonding glue got bitches tellin u to call em pocahontas.
but id rather just b honest and tell u im kin to kunta
my hairs kinky like egyptian goddess. or buddha
or jesus whomever ur god is,
then bat my eyelids cuz when pussy get licked niggas catch furballs regardless

(a lot of unrelated shit but it sounds good. I liked the furball line alot tho)

cut my hair to get dreads something like a rastafarian
u come up wit theories in ya head like darwin. when evolvin.
heard of the great wall of china?
well i got four of the best replicas inside of my vagina.

(What does this mean?)

do i suck dick?? kinda.

(hahah. I guess ik what it means now)

but i do know bitches that put ice cubes on anaconda for a lifetime supply of Benihana.
guess asians the best persuasion. lo mein over lasagna (i like this line)

and maybe hyundai over honda. presuming thats the logic behind head trauma, (non sequitur)

and logic or dilemma thats their drama maybe your problem
mine is being more punctual cuz i need more commas. period.

(Overall not bad. It sounded good and generally made sense, but alot was unrelated except by rhyme.)

^^^ thats me trying to be critical. Honestly its fire. Keep rapping.
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