Week 12: 3PA vs. Adonis - [ADONIS 3-2]

Inno · 05-26-2016, 09:54 PM

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Very precise wording and elegant diction dude. I dug the abstract feel this had. Your flow never faulted and you kept a smooth read through out. Cool take on the topic as well i thought you painted some dope imagery wity a good pace.

Ad

This was cool too... Ypu could of put that twist in a bit more towards the middle so i couldof got a nit more of the actual demon instead of just his description. I thought that twist was dope as fuck bro but i wanted more. This was a cool read man, you wrote some i could relate to you get points for thet.

Overall

This was a pretty even battle tbh. I think ama go with 3pa with a more complete verse in my eyes. Adonis' twist was on point but 3pa dropped some fire. Good battle fellas

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05-26-2016, 09:54 PM	#6
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	3 Very precise wording and elegant diction dude. I dug the abstract feel this had. Your flow never faulted and you kept a smooth read through out. Cool take on the topic as well i thought you painted some dope imagery wity a good pace. Ad This was cool too... Ypu could of put that twist in a bit more towards the middle so i couldof got a nit more of the actual demon instead of just his description. I thought that twist was dope as fuck bro but i wanted more. This was a cool read man, you wrote some i could relate to you get points for thet. Overall This was a pretty even battle tbh. I think ama go with 3pa with a more complete verse in my eyes. Adonis' twist was on point but 3pa dropped some fire. Good battle fellas