Week 12: 3PA vs. Adonis - [ADONIS 3-2]

Razah · 05-26-2016, 12:10 PM

3PA, first verse I read from you. The rhyme scheme & flow on this was pretty on point. I liked it. Reminds me of Frank's style kinda', minus the story telling aspect.

Enjoyable verse, although, I felt 'midget' was a weird word to use. I dunno, just the word itself is kind of taboo for me. Funny, but weird.

Donny Boy, solid verse. I liked the little twist at the end, how the 'monster' was really afraid of the child. Not an original twist to say the least, but the way it was executed was done nicely. I think your flow is at your best when your internals are consecutive, it really makes it flow smoothly.

Good battle / tough vote. 3PA, had the better verse mechanically. The concept he had wasn't mind blowing, but he executed it nicely. His rhyme scheme was on point & the flow was smooth. Adonis had a better story in my eyes. 3PA has him beat with the technical aspects, but I enjoyed Adonis' verse more. It's not he was completely outclassed as far as flow goes or anything like that, not by that big of a margin, which is why Im'a have to vote for him. Also, I think it's weird he threw his name into this battle to reduce no shows. The amount of time I take into dropping a verse sometimes depends on my opponents. Anywho, I can see this going either way, whether you like the way a verse read more, or if you liked the content more, this time, I'm going with content.

vAdonis

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05-26-2016, 12:10 PM	#1
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	3PA, first verse I read from you. The rhyme scheme & flow on this was pretty on point. I liked it. Reminds me of Frank's style kinda', minus the story telling aspect. Enjoyable verse, although, I felt 'midget' was a weird word to use. I dunno, just the word itself is kind of taboo for me. Funny, but weird. Donny Boy, solid verse. I liked the little twist at the end, how the 'monster' was really afraid of the child. Not an original twist to say the least, but the way it was executed was done nicely. I think your flow is at your best when your internals are consecutive, it really makes it flow smoothly. Good battle / tough vote. 3PA, had the better verse mechanically. The concept he had wasn't mind blowing, but he executed it nicely. His rhyme scheme was on point & the flow was smooth. Adonis had a better story in my eyes. 3PA has him beat with the technical aspects, but I enjoyed Adonis' verse more. It's not he was completely outclassed as far as flow goes or anything like that, not by that big of a margin, which is why Im'a have to vote for him. Also, I think it's weird he threw his name into this battle to reduce no shows. The amount of time I take into dropping a verse sometimes depends on my opponents. Anywho, I can see this going either way, whether you like the way a verse read more, or if you liked the content more, this time, I'm going with content. vAdonis