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05-22-2016, 02:26 AM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
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this was nice.. did you drop this in the league?
the transitions were smooth & really clean. prey to succumb felt a tad wordy to work well but you pull it off with how your wording helped if that makes sense...either way this was nice jaded vision could have worked that was sumn I liked.. nice work either way man...keep it up
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