Week 11: Frank vs Mr. J [TIE]

asylum · 05-19-2016, 02:07 AM

Mr. J – man this piece was dope bro it’s nice to see you in full form. Flow was off the charts, story on point. Good character development woven throughout, I didn’t pause once to sip on my beer or nothing. Very entertaining piece. You carried some rhymes effortlessly too.

Frank – this started a little rough for me but I started getting into it just before halfway thru. I was lost for a little while, but I’m pretty sure dude can’t get it up anymore and possibly died from a health complication as a result of his boner pills? not really sure what was going on but it was dope and I enjoyed the middle of your piece especially.

/v mr j , his layout made it easy to pick up his intended flow and I enjoyed his piece more as a result.

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05-19-2016, 02:07 AM	#5
asylum Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Posts: 999 Battle Record: 7-5 Rep Power: 8214211	Mr. J – man this piece was dope bro it’s nice to see you in full form. Flow was off the charts, story on point. Good character development woven throughout, I didn’t pause once to sip on my beer or nothing. Very entertaining piece. You carried some rhymes effortlessly too. Frank – this started a little rough for me but I started getting into it just before halfway thru. I was lost for a little while, but I’m pretty sure dude can’t get it up anymore and possibly died from a health complication as a result of his boner pills? not really sure what was going on but it was dope and I enjoyed the middle of your piece especially. /v mr j , his layout made it easy to pick up his intended flow and I enjoyed his piece more as a result.