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Artifice
Ferris Buellers 30th anniversary is this year. Your Verse came off like Saved by the bell to me. Very cheesy and dated like a 20 year old Wisconsin cheddar. Satisfying cheese, though extra corny like a 1940's drive through movie. I could almost puke it was so palatable. Nice job kid. I can tell your a suburbanite. Adverse Went from describing a lovey dovey moment to detailing a car crash death in 60 seconds flat. Pace was on turbo. Needed more breathing room. Before I wrote this vote I read your post practically giving up. Well, if that's the case. Voting Artifice. Adverse had my vote but sold himself short in the chat and predictions thread
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