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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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Sym, I enjoyed the start of your piece due to its smoothness
then I reached the end of the first portion & its almost like music... the exists/relive idea was so nice that Im going to let it slide you make up for it in the second half & allow yourself to let perfection ride. I really enjoyed the style you use it reminds me of some old heads really dope work here brah, I honestly feel so blessed... Asy, I thought this was a great piece on your behalf you show so much with the perfect pacing that its mad... I thought the vibe you brought set the overall tone. you painted an interesting picture within your raw flow about a few lines in the second half you stumbled a bit but you were able to squeeze an inner up to the slip. a perfect display from you, you get more impressive each week this was more out of your comfort zone & it has pleased me. v/Asylum, I thought both did a bang up job to be honest but where symetrik fumbled, asylum pushed through the gauntlet you showcased his ability to remain a true contender in the weeks to come symetrik is also making an impressive race to soon reach the throne. I feel if he did some extra editing he may have bested his opponent unfortunately asylum is a horse with more endurance & focus. therefore I feel he has completed his duties to advance...
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