Week 7 Contendership Match: Just Write vs. Timeless (TIMELESS WINS 4-3)

breathless · 04-19-2016, 01:35 PM

JW, really solid piece, a well crafted telling of the classic meet/live/lose love story. Where the take on the topic lacked creatively, the word weavery more than made up for it. I feel like, being that the plot's not being the wow factor, had you focused more on crazy multis and flow this could've been a winner

Timeless - I enjoyed where you took the topic. The way in which you told the story reminds me of trying to tell a mundane series of events while peaking on mushrooms, with less sweat and colors, in a good way. The lyrical aspects were heavy yet not forced, a hard feat to pull off while actually talking about something specific.

Vote - timeless

04-19-2016, 01:35 PM	#1
breathless Master of Beastiality Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Lansing, Mi Posts: 368 Battle Record: 4-6 Rep Power: 0	JW, really solid piece, a well crafted telling of the classic meet/live/lose love story. Where the take on the topic lacked creatively, the word weavery more than made up for it. I feel like, being that the plot's not being the wow factor, had you focused more on crazy multis and flow this could've been a winner Timeless - I enjoyed where you took the topic. The way in which you told the story reminds me of trying to tell a mundane series of events while peaking on mushrooms, with less sweat and colors, in a good way. The lyrical aspects were heavy yet not forced, a hard feat to pull off while actually talking about something specific. Vote - timeless __________________ I used to be amazing... http://soundcloud.com/dancourser/sets

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