Week 7: Jesodist vs. Innovator (JESODIST WINS 7-3)

Just Write · 04-18-2016, 08:24 AM

Well this wasn't very close at all

Inno, I applaud you for not no showing but this was mimimal to say the least. I know you just got back into writing so you're still finding your groove again. You had a couple little cool parts but tapered off a bit at the end. Nice showing either way, welcome back.

Jesodist.. sigh, the capitolization is really fucking irritating. We are not toddlers, we can see what rhymes and what doesn't without the use of capitolizing random words that SHOULD NOT be Capitolized and I feel it REALLY takes away from your pieces for me. Regardless of that I liked your verse besides that and it was easily enough to garner a win this week.

Mvgt = jesodist

04-18-2016, 08:24 AM	#4
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Well this wasn't very close at all Inno, I applaud you for not no showing but this was mimimal to say the least. I know you just got back into writing so you're still finding your groove again. You had a couple little cool parts but tapered off a bit at the end. Nice showing either way, welcome back. Jesodist.. sigh, the capitolization is really fucking irritating. We are not toddlers, we can see what rhymes and what doesn't without the use of capitolizing random words that SHOULD NOT be Capitolized and I feel it REALLY takes away from your pieces for me. Regardless of that I liked your verse besides that and it was easily enough to garner a win this week. Mvgt = jesodist __________________

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