Week 7: Adverse vs. Breathless (ADVERSE WINS 10-0 SHUTOUT)

[Just Write]

Well, this was kinda one sided... I expected more from this battle tbh.

Adverse, thought you started out a lot smoother then you ended. Just about before you got to the second day it became a bit choppy but you eventually recovered. I also like how you ended it with the zoloft and ritalin, nice touch. Overall I enjoyed your drop


Breathless.. man you could have taken this had you tried a bit harder, lots of good little tidbits in there, I liked the cookie cutter line the most. Hopefully next week you'll get some motivation back.

Mvgt = Adverse

[2tripple0]

Yeah one sided adverse came with that fire this week enjoyed the end of line rhymes throughout I liked breathless' plot development but I think adverse took u with his rhyme scheme because it contained more structure from what I could take from topic I enjoyed adverse take on the topic again breathless' kept me interested at points but he wasn't able to create so many imitations within his verse and therefore this made it a pretty easy win for adverse but keep it gutter both of y'all did your thing,.....


,......vote: adverse