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Old 04-17-2016, 12:43 AM   #4
Adverse
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To be clear, u ain't a heat holder or street soldier, I'll leave u fuckin shook
In fact, if any1 calls u a warhead, it's cuz ur verses give us a disgusted look
On that note, I got gunz fa days so any beef u might have? u'll wanna stop
All my gats r bubblelicious, cuz when I put a piece in ur mouth it's gonna POP!
Ur to pussy to pose a threat, ill poke ur neck, drain ya blood n tangle u in a knot
Motherfucka, how could u be a legion of doom? When I'm the fuckin animal with a hawk
This a mans game, n it's damn dames like u that soften this text
excuse me if I'm bein rude, but puttin nuts on ur chins how I approach the opposite sex
I'm in the fast lane chasing Orc, u'll remain sluggin it with the worst teir
But I guess Ill slow down n snap ur neck back like going 80 n shoving into 1st gear
See old men buy fast cars n little dudes buy huge trucks, straight up its fuckin facts
So when I long dick ur girl u should pay me, since I make up fa what u lack
The only real bar that stuck out to me is the legion of doom, other than that it was kinda blah to be honest. Well the warhead line was decent too, I don't like the whole stretched bars scheme but if that's what you do it's what you do. Just feel like the verse needed overall more firepower but it's all good. Btw is your name a One Piece reference? I'm dying to know lmao
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