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04-15-2016, 04:17 PM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
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this was pretty smooth for the most part...
especially when you get deeper & the flow starts conducting a little symphony...eh Mozart? after the second line it starts to go hard... my issue began when I reached high win... but I liked it when you continued on with slight risk entire shtick felt like a forced slant but... I liked everything before that.... this reminds me of the conversation you had with pharoah about seeing the rhymes in advertisements on barrels or chalkboards...I dont remember fully but you get the point heres an *up* for ya brah..hopefully this shits enjoyed
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