Week 6: Unbornbuddha vs. Timeless (TIMELESS WINS 6-1)

[symetrik]

timeless' piece
hawt

Soft spoken with her thoughts broken, soaked in rum and misery.
Humming symphonies...

No adrenaline left for the fight, pedaling West through the night.
Landscapes changing so she settles in...

love the flow on these parts. I guess I have a specific way my inner voice reads things and this made it happy.

nawt

Awaiting a flashback, or a simple answer to her questions.
Masses need a lesson as fast as a panther in progression.

just, a weird phrasing to me for that last bit.

unbornbuddha's piece
hawt

Thought I was forever divine, a beautiful sexual design.
Illusions of grandeur had my head in the sky

really wanted "a beautiful sexy design" :'3

But, by that time it’s too late, homeostasis collapses.
This self-regulating life form turns into a fatal contraption

I don't usually like big words but it was nice.

nawt

Until that moment came, where my health declined.

dunno. me no likey.

mvgt: timeless for a more… my kind of cadence.