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Old 04-05-2016, 08:01 PM   #8
Razah
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Symetrik:

Confused how you wrote a about a dude.. besides that, this was still enjoyable.

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her head rush red but her eyes spoke simply that she loved her big dummy.
his face scrunched, making monkey noises at his little monkey girl.
This part was dope. Not even the rhyme of it or anything, just the.. realness of it. Short & sweet verse, good read. Thanks for not annoying me with your rhyming.

2K:
Opener didn’t rhyme. You be frosting sym? Is this a battle? And, what the fuck does frosting someone mean? Also, it didn’t rhyme.

Conatating? That whole bar left me with the Huhhh face. How old are you? I remember seeing you saying you were kinda’ young. Anyways, I get a feeling Jesodist has a better grasp at the English language than you currently do. I’m soooo confused. It’s like you’ll throw in a line that kind of makes it feel like you’re about to actually write to a topic, but then “diss” him. And, I say “diss” in quotes because for a diss / battle verse, this shit is basura. << That word, is Spanish for trash.

I’m gonna stop reading there. I don’t know what 2K was trying to do, but it ain’t working for me. Also, I feel like ya’ll just sugar coat shit with him for entertainment’s sake.

Anyways, I would finish reading his verse but I feel like I’d just end up being a total dick to the kid. Thanks for the easy vote though.

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