Week 3: Just Write vs. Vividly Vague (JUST WRITE WINS SHUTOUT 8-0)

Razah · 03-21-2016, 03:41 PM

I think this battle is a little unfair.

I liked both verses a lot, both were written very solidly. Both flowed smooth, both had enough to get my imagination going, they were both dope.

I really like Vivid's closer, that was slick. The reason I say it's unfair is because Just Write used multiple pictures, which allowed for a more space to tell a story, not to mention that they all blended in well. I actually liked Just Write's verse more, I think he did a good job putting every thing together. Sometimes that can work, sometimes it's too drawn out, but this was well done. Vivid had a dope verse, but I really preferred Write's verse and the whole combination of the pictures. *shrugs

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03-21-2016, 03:41 PM	#8
Razah rockkFresh Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: Chicago. Posts: 1,088 Battle Record: 8-10 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 11328545	I think this battle is a little unfair. I liked both verses a lot, both were written very solidly. Both flowed smooth, both had enough to get my imagination going, they were both dope. I really like Vivid's closer, that was slick. The reason I say it's unfair is because Just Write used multiple pictures, which allowed for a more space to tell a story, not to mention that they all blended in well. I actually liked Just Write's verse more, I think he did a good job putting every thing together. Sometimes that can work, sometimes it's too drawn out, but this was well done. Vivid had a dope verse, but I really preferred Write's verse and the whole combination of the pictures. *shrugs vJust Write