Week 3: Artifice vs. Asylum (ASYLUM WINS 7-2)

[Pharaohs Army]

tough one for me
Artifice has a great flow here
I'd quote lines but it's pretty self-evident and consistent throughout
Regrettably, my "personal preference" may have hurt him here... if he was going against a "lesser" verse he'd get my vote,

But, with the verse here by Asylum, also crisp flows and rhymes

By personal preference I guess I mean I am leaning towards mvgt Asylum because of a bit more storytelling/imagery thrown in

Artifice, this take on Death, while sound technically.. I am not sure... maybe I was just expecting a little story mixed in with the turn-of-phrases

@asylum you've got my vote here for the above reasons, but I do not like your closing line at all (content-wise)..
There isn’t a single thing in the world this woman didn’t give.
Cliche& Seems like you're just trying to wrap it up/get it over with
until one day in Vietnam the shrapnel didn’t miss.

^cool. With this kind of setup I think you could have found something better to close with

close; good job both