Week 3: Artifice vs. Asylum (ASYLUM WINS 7-2)

2tripple0 · 03-20-2016, 07:23 AM

Lol @Mr. J making complete verses as his feed...

Anyways I wasn't really overly impressed with either of these pieces. I thought artifice was decent but he didn't really tackle the topic until halfway through his verse...whereas otoh asylum kept to the content better but again I didn't enjoy how some of his rhymes didn't even rhyme at the end of his lines but overall I think he tackled his topic better then artifice but good luck to both of these lyricists....

Vote..... Asylum

03-20-2016, 07:23 AM	#4
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Lol @Mr. J making complete verses as his feed... Anyways I wasn't really overly impressed with either of these pieces. I thought artifice was decent but he didn't really tackle the topic until halfway through his verse...whereas otoh asylum kept to the content better but again I didn't enjoy how some of his rhymes didn't even rhyme at the end of his lines but overall I think he tackled his topic better then artifice but good luck to both of these lyricists.... Vote..... Asylum __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

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