Week 1: Mr. J vs. Adonis (MR. J WINS 5-4)

[Alice White]

Adonis -

Your approach was a very creative one and I really enjoyed the "subtle" references of attack and member names, especially the bolding of the j was quite nicely integrated. This was a very entertaining read. I thought you had a rather original take on this. Flow was also quite smooth, some multis could've been adjusted to enhance the readability of the rhyming pattern, but the focus here lied rather on the originality of the verse. Good work.


Mr J -

You had some terrific imagery with a beautiful depiction of the character and a rather subtle depiction of her husband. I enjoyed this for the vivid description and choice of vocabulary the most. The ending was also very well integrated.

This is a very close battle to vote on, imo. I really enjoyed both approaches.
However, I thought Adonis had a more creative execution of the topic.

Mvgt - Adonis