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03-01-2016, 06:55 PM
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I really liked the tone of this. Flow-wise, I thought it was quite good, very smooth with a quite nice usage of multis. This was really entertaining, and you had several interesting metaphors as well as some great imagery in this, I also really liked the references, such as in the Baphomet and cupid lines. I love the closing line, a rather clever and fittingly satirical approach. Interesting work.
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