30 Bars of Darkness

Mr. J · 03-01-2016, 12:15 PM

critics weigh in and keep sayin my verse was light, last weeks was harder
if I don't come heavy, it means my current opponent sucks, just being honest
^^^
HA! I can relate to this right here, this whole verse was fire from the jump to the end
the flow of this is smooth as duck shit & makes me want to get back into this mode again
regardless you had quotable after quotable in this piece here. a dope read, heres a bump for you

03-01-2016, 12:15 PM	#16
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	critics weigh in and keep sayin my verse was light, last weeks was harder if I don't come heavy, it means my current opponent sucks, just being honest ^^^ HA! I can relate to this right here, this whole verse was fire from the jump to the end the flow of this is smooth as duck shit & makes me want to get back into this mode again regardless you had quotable after quotable in this piece here. a dope read, heres a bump for you __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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