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03-01-2016, 12:04 PM
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The Clown Prince
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This was interesting, short yet sweet, I like the start of the piece the most
your wording is very crisp, poetic in a sense, with a more appealing flow.. you seem like a knowledgeable writer & it makes me look forward to what you can do in competition due to the shortness of this piece this is all I will say......nice work
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