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Old 02-17-2016, 04:32 PM   #12
Pinot Grij
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Unfuk
Holes is a bit dated but the punch connected. Good wording.
I don't get the .WAV reference.
"moment, ummm" - the wordplay there isn't that killer.
Eggs Benny had the makings of some cool wordplay, but I don't think it came together that harsh.
Strange fruit - again, cool concept, but the execution was just ok.
Vest and vessel was tough to read. Didn't pick up on it til later.
Leisure is cool.

Unfuk - a bit plagued by tough wording, but I like the creativity. Just needs to be pulled together a bit tighter.

Strange
2006 line is cool
50/50 is dope.
un fucked is LOTB. Nice nameplay.
Drone strike is cool imagery.
Penelope Cruz line is funny af.
Paramedic / Jesus is ok.
Carl Grimes is cool, but definitely a niche reference.
Closer was eh.

I gotta go with Strange. I felt like he connected on more concepts. Rewind porno tapes was hilarious. Overall, very entertaining. Like I said before, Unfuk just suffered a bit too much from undeveloped concepts. Cool battle tho.


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