Round One: Argh vs. (Alt) 2tripple0 [OPEN FOR VOTES]

e11even · 01-14-2016, 01:26 AM

Argh- This was terrific and concisely written. Your story was apt in its space with grace and description indicative of a novel. Well done. Your rhyming was fundamentally structured, but the pacing was superb. Great job.

Tripple- three words: lots of drugs. I know this was the result of some kind of high. This is train-of-thought on tabs. I like some of the ideas separately, but obviously the mash wasn't good. This was a lengthy challenge to get through which is impressive in itself. Punctuation and structure was off but predictable imo given the content. Thanks for showing regardless.

MVGT BE for the overall more enjoyable read.

01-14-2016, 01:26 AM	#12
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Argh- This was terrific and concisely written. Your story was apt in its space with grace and description indicative of a novel. Well done. Your rhyming was fundamentally structured, but the pacing was superb. Great job. Tripple- three words: lots of drugs. I know this was the result of some kind of high. This is train-of-thought on tabs. I like some of the ideas separately, but obviously the mash wasn't good. This was a lengthy challenge to get through which is impressive in itself. Punctuation and structure was off but predictable imo given the content. Thanks for showing regardless. MVGT BE for the overall more enjoyable read. __________________ Ahem.

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