Round One: Argh vs. (Alt) 2tripple0 [OPEN FOR VOTES]

Witty · 01-13-2016, 07:08 PM

B.E - Cool verse, it was a nice and consistently well written piece, it wasn't the most exciting story and did lull in to dullness a few times, maybe it was just the concept that I didn't feel was particularly great, but the writing was very good, from a technical standpoint I really have no complaints. You wrote well, told a clear story and had some very interesting word choices. Good stuff.

2tripple0 - I have no idea what this piece is about, therefore I can not leave feedback. It just seems like random words thrown together.

Vote - B.E.

01-13-2016, 07:08 PM	#8
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	B.E - Cool verse, it was a nice and consistently well written piece, it wasn't the most exciting story and did lull in to dullness a few times, maybe it was just the concept that I didn't feel was particularly great, but the writing was very good, from a technical standpoint I really have no complaints. You wrote well, told a clear story and had some very interesting word choices. Good stuff. 2tripple0 - I have no idea what this piece is about, therefore I can not leave feedback. It just seems like random words thrown together. Vote - B.E. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

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