Round One: GodComplex vs. Slecht [OPEN FOR VOTES]

PiE · 01-12-2016, 09:41 PM

Slect, this kind of seems like a no show verse.. I think you should have expanded on your idea and brought it to live with more color and imagery that you were doing. The flow structure wasn't as easy to follow, but that didn't seem to be a focal point on this.. Your wording and imagery seems to be the main points and this needed some expansion to get into more.

GC.. The emotion in your beginning set a good tone and as your emotions changed, it made everything more personal and that drew me closer to the content, which was filled nice flow, good structure and great use of the topic through out. This was a nice read. I liked to close connection made with the camera and the descriptions of taking pictures to make it more than just taking pictures.

Vote GC

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01-12-2016, 09:41 PM	#1
PiE el es a la mode Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: slice of heaven Posts: 94 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 37	Slect, this kind of seems like a no show verse.. I think you should have expanded on your idea and brought it to live with more color and imagery that you were doing. The flow structure wasn't as easy to follow, but that didn't seem to be a focal point on this.. Your wording and imagery seems to be the main points and this needed some expansion to get into more. GC.. The emotion in your beginning set a good tone and as your emotions changed, it made everything more personal and that drew me closer to the content, which was filled nice flow, good structure and great use of the topic through out. This was a nice read. I liked to close connection made with the camera and the descriptions of taking pictures to make it more than just taking pictures. Vote GC