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Originally Posted by Innovator
you acting bro like? we, I'll pump kins face with a melody of soreness
so when the hook smashes his body, they'll blame it on the chorus
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wording is bad imo, mad choppy bro. concept isn;t too shabby tho. Just lacked the execution
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Originally Posted by Nigma
The quickest way to give your face a grimace is exploring family
Since within you there are bitches traits cause in a Vader's orphan Annie
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wording here is choppy as well but i like this better see the NF cool beans bro
v/ Nigma his was less choppy & forced sounding. so it hit cleaner
05-08-2013, 05:02 PM
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