Round One: Chat and Prediction - Page 6

Pharaohs Army · 01-12-2016, 07:33 PM

ah. good old sarcasm eh. you duped me @Bags.

Ghost1 · 01-12-2016, 08:12 PM

Do I still fit in?

Pent uP · 01-12-2016, 09:26 PM

@Adonis @sraL

Next round can the topics be of better resolution

Certain · 01-12-2016, 11:44 PM

I want to thank Adonis for putting Pinot Grij and brokenhal0 against each other because Pinot definitely is sitting there wondering what the fuck is wrong with voters who think it's close.

(Note: I haven't read either verse. This is about stylistic preferences.)

Pinot Grij · 01-13-2016, 12:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

I want to thank Adonis for putting Pinot Grij and brokenhal0 against each other because Pinot definitely is sitting there wondering what the fuck is wrong with voters who think it's close.

(Note: I haven't read either verse. This is about stylistic preferences.)

I don't get it...

If anything, I've loved the feedback so far. I ended my verse the way I did to try to appease a certain voter base that would've thought my verse was too weird or too off topic. Everybody is telling me they don't want that kind of predictability - which only makes me more excited for next week - if I move on.

Certain · 01-13-2016, 01:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

I don't get it...

If anything, I've loved the feedback so far. I ended my verse the way I did to try to appease a certain voter base that would've thought my verse was too weird or too off topic. Everybody is telling me they don't want that kind of predictability - which only makes me more excited for next week - if I move on.

I mean that your reading/voting taste is directly contradictory to brokenhal0's writing style.

Pinot Grij · 01-13-2016, 02:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

I mean that your reading/voting taste is directly contradictory to brokenhal0's writing style.

Yea, like, what was that motherfucker even talking about?

UnbornBuddha · 01-13-2016, 12:57 AM

@Argh

You ask if I wrote under another moniker? Yes, UnbornBuddha. We competed in the RHYME; I will get my old name back soon. That's why I asked when you first posted here to bring Sacrifice out of hiding.

Argh · 01-13-2016, 01:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Godcomplex

@Argh

You ask if I wrote under another moniker? Yes, UnbornBuddha. We competed in the RHYME; I will get my old name back soon. That's why I asked when you first posted here to bring Sacrifice out of hiding.

Ah. I see you've tightened up your writing quite a bit (a compliment). Looking forward to facing you again at some point. I miss the RHYME, which had/has an uncomparable level of talent.

UnbornBuddha · 01-13-2016, 01:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Argh

Ah. I see you've tightened up your writing quite a bit (a compliment). Looking forward to facing you again at some point. I miss the RHYME, which had/has an uncomparable level of talent.

Yes, looking forward to it. I quite like the RHYME too; unfortunately, it appears the site is inactive, a barren wasteland it seems, in terms of topical writing. Plus, the last tournament wasn't even completed, a shame. Glad to see you competing though.

Mr. J · 01-13-2016, 01:30 AM

Boredom is a fiendish troll that dwells in my sole
with that being said, in the snakes eyes...let the good times roll

NYCSPITZ · 01-13-2016, 12:24 PM

my functioning sclera is coming for pinot...switch it up on him with some disneyland shit

Pinot Grij · 01-13-2016, 01:26 PM

I wish my sclera was not functioning when I read that line.

Pinot Grij · 01-13-2016, 03:11 PM

Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

Diode · 01-13-2016, 03:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

in which pinot outs himself as a syrup guzzler, eh?

Certain · 01-13-2016, 03:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

way too much punctuation and capitalization to be brokenhal0 man

e11even · 01-13-2016, 06:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pinot Grij

Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like:

Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness
I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous
Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing
Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee

And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god"

Fucking flames. I lol'd.

Witty · 01-13-2016, 04:00 PM

That Cimmerian verse tho.

Mr. J · 01-13-2016, 07:02 PM

@Adonis you want this work buddy

Adonis · 01-13-2016, 07:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. J

@Adonis you want this work buddy

Mr J don't know what real work is, nor could he handle the consequences of Adonis verbal ejaculate

facts

01-12-2016, 11:44 PM	#4
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	I want to thank Adonis for putting Pinot Grij and brokenhal0 against each other because Pinot definitely is sitting there wondering what the fuck is wrong with voters who think it's close. (Note: I haven't read either verse. This is about stylistic preferences.) __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

01-13-2016, 01:30 AM	#11
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Boredom is a fiendish troll that dwells in my sole with that being said, in the snakes eyes...let the good times roll __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

01-13-2016, 12:24 PM	#12
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	my functioning sclera is coming for pinot...switch it up on him with some disneyland shit __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

01-13-2016, 01:26 PM	#13
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	I wish my sclera was not functioning when I read that line. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

01-13-2016, 03:11 PM	#14
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Yo next time I go to Tim Hortons I'm not gonna be like, "Can I have a large coffee?" - I'm gonna be like: Liquid dreams mixed with cream distancing my consciousness I relapse when caffeine snaps moments elapse ominous Mask my ego with cappuccino - steam rises, bubbles frothing Vanilla beans are millipedes still I scheme for cups of coffee And the chick gon be like :O "He a text god" __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

01-12-2016, 07:33 PM	#1
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	ah. good old sarcasm eh. you duped me @Bags.

01-13-2016, 12:57 AM	#8
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	@Argh You ask if I wrote under another moniker? Yes, UnbornBuddha. We competed in the RHYME; I will get my old name back soon. That's why I asked when you first posted here to bring Sacrifice out of hiding.

01-13-2016, 04:00 PM	#18
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	That Cimmerian verse tho. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

01-13-2016, 07:02 PM	#19
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	@Adonis you want this work buddy __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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