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12-28-2015, 10:01 AM
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"lakeside coming of age" - this seems so simple, but the imagery is deep and full of interpretable memory. With these four words, you've plucked the chord on whatever summer camp heartbreak your reader recalls. The emotion is universal.
the verse was super impressive, but this little line really affected me. this was striking work - very fun to read.
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