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05-07-2013, 10:13 PM
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Om
Join Date: Jan 2013
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This felt like something ready to spit. It was fresh, but pretty basic for just text. When it comes to text, you gotta change it up. Stronger concepts, structure, wording etc.
Dont get me wrong though, i really liked it, it just aint a great text piece ya know? If you rap though, id love to hear it.
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