The Joke's Still On You

[Just Write]

this was a nice little drop, felt that you coulda smoothed it out by dropping some add on words- for instance instead of

Never has there been someone so sadistic
so sick that it's twisted, Keith Sweating my ignorance

would have come off cleaner imo like this

Never has there been someone so sadistic
so sick n twisted, Keith Sweating my ignorance

as far as everything else goes i dig the laid back rap flow. keep keyin