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One-Punch Man
Join Date: Nov 2015
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Hmm...this was BOTR.
Wavy - smooth verse....can read this verse up and down quickly. Good lines worded well, I can see why you won 1 of these before. liked the dolla sign, ted dibiase line, mucinex was cool but break whatevers up was vague...overall your have a good grasp of s&f Schein - dope metaphors....opener was real cool...although the setups seemed a bit dialed in for the line, Spec Ops mottos we roaring - $ign crew flex hawks & hollows be pouring No Kendo throat kicks, Extendos loaded.. Got ya catchin' Clips unexpected like Xbox auto recording ^ good line. good scheme and flowed well. very 1-2 couplet setup/punch like, but no problem there Id have to edge this to Wavy, but this could rock either way. nice battle yall |
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