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11-11-2015, 05:38 AM
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Nice Intro Lotta rhyming in between the lines Some of your bars are are really long but after putting them together and finding the proper flow to it, It became really enjoyable.
Don't know if the Red was supposed to mean the men and if the pink was supposed to mean the ladies but its quite a nice blend and also integrated throughout the whole verse. |
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