dreams in which im living

King Ra. · 05-06-2013, 12:27 AM

Wtf @Split. Lmao. Don't be like that son.

@Creed Very short, pretty simple, but I like the poetic, emotional feel that this presents. This could've been stronger from a writing standpoint to really drive some of the feelings you were sharing, like "the innocence is bliss, consciousness resists" part which I thought was very thought provoking. Nonetheless, a nice lil read here. Keep dropping. Holler.

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05-06-2013, 12:27 AM	#3
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	Wtf @Split. Lmao. Don't be like that son. @Creed Very short, pretty simple, but I like the poetic, emotional feel that this presents. This could've been stronger from a writing standpoint to really drive some of the feelings you were sharing, like "the innocence is bliss, consciousness resists" part which I thought was very thought provoking. Nonetheless, a nice lil read here. Keep dropping. Holler.