Week 15: (3-1) VividlyVague vs. (1-4) Flo Real - VIVID 5-0

Exis · 11-05-2015, 11:57 PM

VV - From the get go I thought you set the tone well, your word usage was nice with it....you stayed on topic & had some good descriptive imagery...solid verse all 'round.

Flo - Unfortunately your 'flow' is a hindrance while readin'...it's not woeful but yeah it's choppy in places, You also had some nice imagery & content as a whole is pretty cool...did feel @ times you lost your way tho, felt a little disconnected from the story.

Vote - VV simply for the fact he had a better, more enjoyable verse.

Stay uppity.

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11-05-2015, 11:57 PM	#7
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	VV - From the get go I thought you set the tone well, your word usage was nice with it....you stayed on topic & had some good descriptive imagery...solid verse all 'round. Flo - Unfortunately your 'flow' is a hindrance while readin'...it's not woeful but yeah it's choppy in places, You also had some nice imagery & content as a whole is pretty cool...did feel @ times you lost your way tho, felt a little disconnected from the story. Vote - VV simply for the fact he had a better, more enjoyable verse. Stay uppity.