2triple0 vs Mr. J - MJ 6-0

timeless · 10-29-2015, 10:34 AM

"Like I'm stealing boulders I'm digging up ancient ruins." - what?

"Bloodline thick like a forest so I have to Freeman like Morgan" - the fuck?

"Love the taste of ya flesh but I don't have many friends." - oook.

"Onions kill my kind so don't call me a vegan." - lmao

"Traveled many regions and killed off twenty or thirty regions" - come on bro.

I really just can't understand trips thought process when he writes. I haven't even seen any improvement at all. He just doesn't care for critique and keeps freestyling with his thoughts. Get it together fool and take notes and read more.

J - you fucking clown. Doing just enough to win here obviously. The ending was coolin. Not much else to say really aside from this is one of your worst verses.

V. J

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10-29-2015, 10:34 AM	#9
timeless past tense Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: NJ Posts: 1,623 Battle Record: 22-39 Rep Power: 4341329	"Like I'm stealing boulders I'm digging up ancient ruins." - what? "Bloodline thick like a forest so I have to Freeman like Morgan" - the fuck? "Love the taste of ya flesh but I don't have many friends." - oook. "Onions kill my kind so don't call me a vegan." - lmao "Traveled many regions and killed off twenty or thirty regions" - come on bro. I really just can't understand trips thought process when he writes. I haven't even seen any improvement at all. He just doesn't care for critique and keeps freestyling with his thoughts. Get it together fool and take notes and read more. J - you fucking clown. Doing just enough to win here obviously. The ending was coolin. Not much else to say really aside from this is one of your worst verses. V. J