Anna Did It

e11even · 10-27-2015, 04:38 AM

Wtf bro this was amazing. I felt like this was Goosebumps The Dummy, or Pinnochio(the scary one) or one of the early Chucky's. This style is my preferred method of writing, but it's usually not as crisp as this, despite the few punctuation and grammar issues I did see. This was dope and would be a hard verse to beat in the AOWL if this angle was never properly captured before. Good job bro. I have two pieces open if you care to RTF.

10-27-2015, 04:38 AM	#4
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Wtf bro this was amazing. I felt like this was Goosebumps The Dummy, or Pinnochio(the scary one) or one of the early Chucky's. This style is my preferred method of writing, but it's usually not as crisp as this, despite the few punctuation and grammar issues I did see. This was dope and would be a hard verse to beat in the AOWL if this angle was never properly captured before. Good job bro. I have two pieces open if you care to RTF. __________________ Ahem.

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