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Old 10-15-2015, 10:06 PM   #1
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I'm not in this to fight. bottom line, I'm ending his life
hit him with a pipe, put him underground & make PVC what it's like
u won't be missed either once I finish puttin this drill in ya
the only cat still looking for pur after this battle will be ill-nik-A
ill throw slugs at u that leave ur family in sniffles
u point slugs at me & watch me turn that Louie into a whiffle
& bro, that wack ass user title has got to go
it's only pur fue go if you just read the 'fue' part in español
just stop, kid, I got hard shells filled with beef that'll make u drop dead
leave this bitch upside down and inside out, cause vida loca if he thinks he can top des
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Old 10-16-2015, 01:42 AM   #2
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Honestly, the flourishes u use in your wording is irritating..lbs. Also the 3-bar shit is pointless, just reads as longwinded. Actually those concepts could have nailed your opponent, had the wording been more concise.

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Decent verse, great straight punches. A couple of 'em missed, but that was preference. Although the vida loca closer was hurt by wording.

Overall a cool battle, Pur probably would have took this if it weren't for the run-on sentences & poetic liscence he was taking w/ his wording, so this was quick W for DESTROYER.
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Old 10-18-2015, 01:10 AM   #3
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Your set ups fall short. We're not understanding it like it's dubbed in sankrit.
You should get brought up to speed...
Those connections only interest, internet companies to call you to UP your bandwidth
--dated concept, tbh. execution was nothing new.
Your skills mirror the life of retired pickpocketing thieves and that's bummy,
cause that means you're no longer giving anyone a run for their money.
--underworded. didnt allow the concept to develop fully.
proficient my balls, you're not trained in a battle field or arena type.
They wants some toe-to-toe action...
but you're doing a spin on punches that resembles the ones in a ballerina fight.
--ballerina fight kind of weird. seems like a stretch. also was worded pretty heavy. good idea. most ya shit good idea just lacks execution.
for the love of mankind. faggot shut up, I'll have the silencer right to ur lips homie
u the type to say u would only put a sock in it, if it involves foreplaying with mick foley
--wording wasnt the best again but i still liked this.
it's not just you getting older, des. everything is outdated just like ur bars is
when reality hit ya, ur career on the net goes downhill quicker than lamars did.
--nahhhhh. too many odom lines this week.
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I'm not in this to fight. bottom line, I'm ending his life
hit him with a pipe, put him underground & make PVC what it's like
--this is dope.
u won't be missed either once I finish puttin this drill in ya
the only cat still looking for pur after this battle will be ill-nik-A
--haha solid.
ill throw slugs at u that leave ur family in sniffles
u point slugs at me & watch me turn that Louie into a whiffle
--damn. creative and cool.
& bro, that wack ass user title has got to go
it's only pur fue go if you just read the 'fue' part in español
--im missing something.
just stop, kid, I got hard shells filled with beef that'll make u drop dead
leave this bitch upside down and inside out, cause vida loca if he thinks he can top des
--ok
cool verse from des. pura is still newish and his wording realllllly hurt him. good effort tho. pvc and louie were dope

v/ des
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Old 10-18-2015, 07:09 PM   #4
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Your set ups fall short. We're not understanding it like it's dubbed in sankrit.
You should get brought up to speed...
Those connections only interest, internet companies to call you to UP your bandwidth
-aight old but good
Your skills mirror the life of retired pickpocketing thieves and that's bummy,
cause that means you're no longer giving anyone a run for their money.
-cool
proficient my balls, you're not trained in a battle field or arena type.
They wants some toe-to-toe action...
but you're doing a spin on punches that resembles the ones in a ballerina fight.
-nice i like this one fresh concept
for the love of mankind. faggot shut up, I'll have the silencer right to ur lips homie
u the type to say u would only put a sock in it, if it involves foreplaying with mick foley
-word good
it's not just you getting older, des. everything is outdated just like ur bars is
when reality hit ya, ur career on the net goes downhill quicker than lamars did.
-good new concept and worked well
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I'm not in this to fight. bottom line, I'm ending his life
hit him with a pipe, put him underground & make PVC what it's like
-haha good
u won't be missed either once I finish puttin this drill in ya
the only cat still looking for pur after this battle will be ill-nik-A
-eh not feelin this
ill throw slugs at u that leave ur family in sniffles
u point slugs at me & watch me turn that Louie into a whiffle
-this was okay
& bro, that wack ass user title has got to go
it's only pur fue go if you just read the 'fue' part in español
-eh too forced for me
just stop, kid, I got hard shells filled with beef that'll make u drop dead
leave this bitch upside down and inside out, cause vida loca if he thinks he can top des
-good ending

both were good, I had to read it 2 times.
was a close battle from both.

Ima have to go with v.Pura on this one. i liked a few more concepts from him . and some good executions.
Des. felt like you could have went better. ive seen your previous work and didnt think you went as hard.
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