2triple0 vs JESODIST - JESODIST 4-0

Flow · 10-15-2015, 06:24 AM

Hot in hurrr wendy aspect was total fire....

Anyways. Dude. 2trip.Wtf. Other then that line which was just amazing for all the wrong reasons you seem to be getting worse. Or not improving at all. I mean what is the topic and where is the direction. What was the general idea or vision you were trying to portray. What was the point in reading this? If your going to just write off a whim and make bollocks all sense i sugggest getting lots of intricate rhymes in there because for the most part this was just end rhymes at its most basic.

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10-15-2015, 06:24 AM	#9
Flow Upset Champion Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: West Mids Posts: 3,861 Battle Record: 57-49 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Rookie Tourney - 1-2 Punch League (x2) - Pandemonium Cypher - 1-2 Punch league Season 9 Rep Power: 24894581	Hot in hurrr wendy aspect was total fire.... Anyways. Dude. 2trip.Wtf. Other then that line which was just amazing for all the wrong reasons you seem to be getting worse. Or not improving at all. I mean what is the topic and where is the direction. What was the general idea or vision you were trying to portray. What was the point in reading this? If your going to just write off a whim and make bollocks all sense i sugggest getting lots of intricate rhymes in there because for the most part this was just end rhymes at its most basic. Vote the other guy