Rakontur vs Flo Real - RAK 4-1

[Frank]

Rakontur

Its me, Barbarsar? LMAO Who did I tell you I was>? Anyways Rakontur, You are one of the few writers on Netcees who can get away with not using Multies. I actually cringe when you use multies (not really but for the sake of argument) You're much more unique when you disregard the multi all together and write poetically. 90% of your effective pieces have a line pertaining to the "heart". I've said this before, but it still rings true lol. Not much to this excerpt. It was a shallow, grave submission, Which seems like what you were going for.

FloReal

I applaud your attempt at storytelling in a intricate manner. Lots of tedious detail goes into making a visual truly pop. Somewhere along the lines you lost your footing on solid ground and were swept away with the momentum you had created while writing. It swept you through the Cave you created and spit you out, unsure, of where, and how you got where you went.

Coo battle, thought Flo Real sold his self short with the quibble with Aladdin at the end. Almost like he was embarrassed that he didn't key this time

MVGT Rakontur